21) Will you still love me?

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BY courtesy of rcwa.org.uk

You beat her up with many reasons

Kiss her with no reason

Sparks in your eyes

Fist with diamond ring in the air

You said sorry uncountable times

And she begins to feel sorry for herself

She says

“I am not sure if I can bear with this anymore”

And you asked her.

“Will you still love me?”

By courtesy of grinningplanet.com

You trimmed me down with many reasons

Keep me when you said you love eco

Spark on my body from the eyes of your saw

Yet, you said you love your garden

You confused me

And I started to confuse myself

I am not sure if I can bear with this any more

And you asked me

“Will you still love me?”

By courtesy of tutufoundationusa.org

You bombed me with many reasons

Lock me up for peace

Spark in the eyes of a warrior

But, you only love your own family

You worry me

And I started to worry for myself

I am not sure if I can bear with this any more

And you asked me

A question I don’t even know how to answer myself

“Will you still love me anymore?”

36 thoughts on “21) Will you still love me?

    mobius faith said:
    November 21, 2012 at 12:59 am

    This is really powerful Sydney. Well done. Very moving.

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 1:03 am

      thanks! I really hate violence, sorry to say that!

        mobius faith said:
        November 21, 2012 at 1:05 am

        Nothin’ wrong with hating violence – being able to transform it into nonviolence the key. But first we need to draw attention to it – which you’ve done.

        Sydney Fong responded:
        November 21, 2012 at 1:16 am

        I hope this post let me step into another milestone of my Blogging life! thanks for your compliments!

    katrinaedwards said:
    November 21, 2012 at 1:24 am

    I hate violence too… :(
    This is a voice from a good soul…from a kind heart and a thoughtful mind…

    thank you for the sharing Sydney…the poem is brilliantly written.. :)

      katrinaedwards said:
      November 21, 2012 at 1:27 am

      and I love watching the video… :D

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 1:33 am

      I feel so proud about your compliments, but on the other hand, to pen down and write somethings, that all I can do as a tiny fella like me ! cheers!

        katrinaedwards said:
        November 21, 2012 at 1:37 am

        that is good enough Sydney….better than nothing.. :)

        Cheers..

        *@1.45am.. :D

    katrinaedwards said:
    November 21, 2012 at 1:25 am

    Reblogged this on Katrina and commented:
    I can’t do it better..thank you Sydney

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 1:37 am

      Thank you so much my friend!

        katrinaedwards said:
        November 21, 2012 at 1:38 am

        I thanked you too, my friend.. :D

    yourothermotherhere said:
    November 21, 2012 at 1:35 am

    Whoa, that really has impact.

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 1:38 am

      I hope so! Stop the Violence,Protect the Environment,Stop the War!

        yourothermotherhere said:
        November 21, 2012 at 2:22 am

        Yes!!!

    ayoliag said:
    November 21, 2012 at 2:32 am

    Very moving and sadly the daily tune for many! They wish they could end such a vicious cycle yet there is something holding them back. But what is love really? Can it be that great that people tolerate such abuse?

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 9:33 am

      of course, sometime we need tolerate to get the message across to your love one. But the issue is love shouldn’t be restricted to your own boundary. I know saying is easier than done.cheers! :)

    boomiebol said:
    November 21, 2012 at 2:33 am

    Deep

    Mary said:
    November 21, 2012 at 2:47 am

    Too powerful for words ~

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 9:14 am

      I wish I can be more powerful for words or more powerful than words! thanks for your compliments! :)

    Seyi sandra said:
    November 21, 2012 at 3:33 am

    Very touching, very poignant. Excellent poem!

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 9:16 am

      thanks! this is really poignant piece!

    malna said:
    November 21, 2012 at 4:13 am

    Beautiful moving post!

    kelihasablog said:
    November 21, 2012 at 6:15 am

    Very powerful piece Sydney…. Excellent! :D

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 9:10 am

      thank you! I am glad you like it! :)

    Aian Ramos said:
    November 21, 2012 at 7:50 am

    Wow, this is really moving. I love it, specially …”But, you only love your own family
    You worry me”…that really touched me. There’s something so right and so wrong about this kind of love, you should love your family but not just your family. I think it’s when most problem starts, when you limit your love to something or someone. I believe it should extend to every human being or every living thing..the love and the respect. Maybe then nobody will have to ask if he’s love still.

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 21, 2012 at 9:33 am

      yes! we love but only limit to our own. we share but only restrict with our favorite subjects. Nothing wrong categorize the degree of love,just like parents, relatives,friends and strangers. But love must exist, in order to decrease the conflict of all beings.

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    kersheaclement said:
    November 26, 2012 at 7:58 am

    Sydney I also found this really moving…So many ills of society would dissipate through right education of children,bringing them up as tender trees watering them with love,compassion and all the spiritual/emotional/nutrients they need to grow. In an ideal society this is possible;e,but unfortunately we don’t live in an ideal society…. I always wonder why education focuses on science and mathematics, and why it isnt more humanistic/holistic… teaching kids to be better citizens of the earth- rooted in love,compassion and the desire to serve all, in big or small ays for the betterment of mankind. Thank you for following my blog , http://20somethingeverything.wordpress.com/ , but this isnt my active blog… my active blog is http://kersheaclement.wordpress.com/ ~so please follow that instead if you’d wish. and basically, I’ve recently started writing and blogging as a means to express myself.

    Have a beautiful day.
    Many blesings
    and looking forward to reading the your new posts.

    Kershea

      Sydney Fong responded:
      November 26, 2012 at 1:33 pm

      Hi Kershea! I am so touch by your compliments, as I am just a lame person always not enough money in the pocket.
      But I always feel a fire in my heart when I see things not right or somethings gone wrong, I will start fire! Of course I got no missile or weapon even though I am not going to use it!
      I will put myself at one corner to ask, why must violence exist on earth? is there any other forms to stop all these?
      So as a tiny Blogger like me, the only things I can do is to write. I wrote a poem “He asked” you may read it, do it when you are free!
      So much about myself today! I see you then!

    tchistorygal said:
    December 17, 2012 at 8:07 am

    Your poem starts with something close to us – personal abuse, then on to something environmental – which we all contribute to in one way or another, then finally to a huge problem – war, violence of the utmost out of control kind. We say we’re sorry, but then we do it again. That is the mystery. have we no self-discipline. What does it take to get us to stop destructive, hurtful behaviors? What makes people start that in the first place? How do we stop it before it starts? Great poem. As usual, you’ve made me think or laugh or cry. I love your blog. I’m featuring it on my post tomorrow. Look for it!!! :)

      Sydney Fong responded:
      December 17, 2012 at 5:40 pm

      Hey, I feel giddy after reading so much compliments about my post from you!
      In fact this is one my favorite song series, it signify the crazy side of me! and is also a birthday gift for myself, see how strange I am?

        tchistorygal said:
        December 17, 2012 at 5:51 pm

        I wouldn’t classify it as crazy, more like reflective or introspective. It’s revealing, and sensitive. :)

        Sydney Fong responded:
        December 17, 2012 at 6:02 pm

        Yes, you are right, My friend! Is not easy to find a friend who know me so well over the ocean!
        I really feel so glad to meet you! I’ll see you around! :)

        tchistorygal said:
        December 17, 2012 at 6:12 pm

        Same here! :)

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